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Post by And Kevin 2024 on Mar 16, 2020 16:32:34 GMT
I assume it a book for children? Your name is missing though.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 16, 2020 16:46:45 GMT
So true Kevin. No wonder I need critiques. Yes it's a childrens' book. It's very short but I also left out one verse.
"Sheep and cattle love outdoors,
It causes me alarm,
They spend their lives in concrete yards.
The new intensive farm."
I'll have to add that, plus my name. What's the cliche "More haste less speed."
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Post by Deleted on Mar 16, 2020 19:06:52 GMT
I've deleted the cover because I forgot to add my name. Sigh!!!
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Post by And Kevin 2024 on Mar 16, 2020 23:05:36 GMT
Why delete it? Could you not just add it?
But where are you talking about? The report on LSE students avoiding meat due to climate change is about South America, not here, and most meat sold in the UK is farmed in the UK.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 17, 2020 11:52:24 GMT
I'm changing that line which refers to the UK and making it more universal. However "Nearly every county in England has at least one industrial-scale livestock farm, with close to 800 US-style mega farms operating across the UK, new research reveals. ... To be classed as intensive, a farm must have warehouses with more than 40,000 birds, 2,000 pigs or 750 breeding sows." (Humane Society)
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Post by Deleted on Mar 17, 2020 11:54:41 GMT
I meant delete it from here and redo in my Paint Shop Pro. I'll send it to you when I do. Kevin the fact that the rain forests in South America are being cut down and cutting down the world's trees, really effects global climate. Much land and many rain-forests and other forests in our world, are being destroyed to make room for these horrible factory farms. They are so cruel and not like traditional farms. It is a fact that trees, and plants absorb carbon dioxide in the atmosphere in order to produce oxygen. With the rapid depletion of the trees, the level of carbon dioxide is going down, which is increasing global warming. This is a worl-wide issue not just for the UK.
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